Pitch Proposals + Evaluation

This is my pitch for my TV show, where I am talking about which presenter role I would like to take on and the reasons behind my decision. I have chosen to do a lifestyle show, which will be a cooking show. This is because I am familiar with shows like 'Jamie Oliver's 30 minute meals' and 'Come dine with me' and have seen how the presenters on those shows go about presenting the show.

Additionally, I spoke about everything else that I will consider when making this cooking show which are things like the location and the lighting, the dialogue and presentation style, which are all things that need to be done well in order for the show to look professional and appealing to the target audience. To add, I then went on to talk about my alternatives if my lifestyle show was to not go to plan, which were a chat show host or a continuity announcer. For each I went through anything which I thought may go wrong on the day of filming and how I can avoid them, also the reason why I think I'll be a good host for each show. To add, I went through discussing the target audience for each one and how they will be appealed to, and why I've chosen these particular age ranges and socio-economic classes.
On improvement, I could have elaborated more on specific points which my peers didn't understand and make what I'm saying more clearer. I could have also answered their question more thoroughly making them understand everything and have a clear picture of what I am talking about. This is essential for any pitch if it is going to be a good one.